People love a good story! A story is a great way to engage and connect with the reader from the start. Admissions counselors read hundreds of essays. You have to grab their attention right away.
You want to: Tell the story of ONE interesting and important moment. Write in ways that gets the reader picturing what was happening, using descriptions, dialogue, action and thinking.
Read the intro to Kelly’s essay. Notice the interesting moment she selected, and how she described it.
I was 14 years old when my Great-Gran turned 94. The entire family gathered at her nursing home to celebrate her. She was small and frail, and confined to a wheelchair, but she was still full of fire. When no one was looking, she called me over with a wave. “You want to see what I got?” she asked me. I nodded. Looking around furtively, she reached behind her back and pulled a lead pipe, six inches long and heavy, from beneath her wheelchair cushion. “I might be 94,” she said, “but they won’t catch me slipping!”
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Lesson: The Great College Essay Project