The people you write about must "come alive on the page." In this exercise, select the important details that distinguish the person you're describing. In 30-50 words, describe one of the following:
- a person in a long supermarket line with an inept clerk at the checkout counter
- a member of your family trying to deal with a cantankerous relative
- a person telling his/her spouse about a promotion
Tip: Think about facial expressions, gestures, body language, clothing style and voice inflections.
Example:
Bundled in a hairy overcoat, the man drummed his fingers on a box of oatmeal, tapped his feet, rolled his eyes, and set his lips in a thin straight line. Finally, he shrugged. Muttering something inaudible, he stomped off, abandoning his crammed shopping cart.