I'M SORRY! Due to the scaffolded nature of the story-planning process, I cannot provide feedback on the tasks in Workbooks #2-5 unless I’ve done so for all the tasks in the workbooks preceding it. Why? Because I need to understand your story’s bigger picture and all the intricacies introduced right from the first task in order to accurately analyse the story elements you covered in subsequent tasks.
If you wish to first receive feedback on the tasks you completed in Workbook #1, please visit Option to Submit #1 and sign the Agreement for Book Coaching Services before submitting the first workbook.