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云上站着一高一矮两道身影，高的是一位头发花白的老道，他带着一名八九岁模样的灵秀女童。
白云悠悠心悠悠，清风伴左何须愁？
便听老道慨声而歌：
“鸿蒙开辟龙凤劫，万元千会弹指过。
不见仙台登临阁，只闻重霄九华歌。
渡人渡己度幽河，笑人笑神消灾祸。
问君何以眷故里，先贤折骨得运落

你要记住，咱们道承名为【度仙门】，开山祖师乃当今仙神榜上赫赫有名的西昆仑度厄真人，所传道承为【一气正天道】，这是极高深的长生妙法！
可都记住了？这可是你今后的跟脚，不可忘却哦。”
“嗯！徒儿都记住了！”
女童十分认真地点点头，老道甩了甩拂尘，驾着白云朝着前方大阵缓缓靠近，手中也拿出了一只巴掌大小的玉符。
就见玉符闪烁出盈盈绿光，护山大阵便缓缓裂出了一条缝隙，容老道带着女童驾云入内。
这对师徒刚进阵，几只白鹤就从云间低掠而来，其上站着几名身着道袍彩裙的年轻人，正是此时负责巡山的门内弟子。
他们向前与老道见礼打了个招呼，口称‘齐源师叔’，问过这女童是这老道新收的徒弟之后，便踩着白鹤潇洒离开。
女童那双大眼亮晶晶的，倒映着那两位身姿婀娜的女弟子背影。
“师父，灵娥什么时候能踩着仙鹤御空呀。”
“待你炼出了胸中五气，自可御物而行，”老道齐源抚须笑道，“你见那是仙鹤，其实都是一些法器所化，不要着急，修行要慢慢来才是。
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Please Rate this Translation -- 1* This field is required.As two figures stood above the clouds, one tall and one short, the old Daoist with white hair led a young girl with a gifted aura. As white clouds slowly drifted by, the old Daoist began to sing: "When the world was created, and the dragon and phoenix roamed, thousands of years passed in the blink of an eye. No longer can we see the divine palace, only the nine songs of the sky. Crossing the river of darkness, both for oneself and others, we laugh at the misfortune of both gods and mortals. Why do you cling to your past, when the sages have sacrificed to gain enlightenment? Remember, our sect is known as Deity Crossing Sect, and our founding master is the famous XiXuan True Daoist on the current divine list of the Western Kunlun. Our sect follows the path of One Qi Righteous Way, which is a profound method for longevity! Did you remember all that? It will be your guiding principle, so do not forget. "Yes, Master!" The girl nodded solemnly, and the old Daoist waved his whisk as they approached the array on the white cloud. He held a jade talisman the size of his palm, which glowed green and opened a gap in the protective array. The master and disciple entered. As soon as they entered, several white cranes appeared from the clouds, carrying young men and women in colorful robes. These were the disciples on duty who were patrolling the mountain. They greeted the old Daoist and called him "Master Qiyuan." After learning that the girl was the old Daoist's new disciple, they bid farewell and left on their cranes. The girl's eyes sparkled as she watched the graceful figures disappear. "Master, when can Ling'er ride on a crane too?" "When you cultivate the Five Qi in your chest, you can command objects and fly with them. The cranes you see are actually magical artifacts. Don't rush, take your time in your practice," the old Daoist, Master Qiyuan, stroked his beard and smiled.
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Please Rate this Translation - 2* This field is required.In the sky, two figures appeared, one tall and one short. The tall one had white hair and was accompanied by an eight or nine-year-old girl genius. The old man was carefree and gentle, like a cloud floating in the sky. Listening to the old man's words, they sounded like a song: "Open the divine dragon and seize the phoenix, Cross the mountains and rivers in a single stride, Climb to the immortal realm and return unharmed, Transform into a fairy and ascend to the heavens." The old man continued, "You must remember, we of the Daoist sect are called the 'Crossing the Deity Sect'. Our founder and ancestor is the famous Xixuan True Daoist, who is renowned even today. Our sect's Daoist practice is called the 'One Qi Spiritual Purity Sect'. This is a profound and mysterious method of longevity! Do you understand?" The girl nodded seriously, "I understand, master." The old man waved his hand, and a jade talisman appeared. As the jade talisman emitted a green light, a crack appeared in the mountain range, allowing the old man and the girl to enter on a cloud. Upon entering the mountain range, they encountered several white cranes, each with a young person wearing a Daoist robe and an embroidered garment. These were the inner disciples currently responsible for patrolling the mountains. They greeted the old man and girl, calling them "Qi Sources" and asked about the girl, who was the new disciple of the old man. They then nodded and flew away on the white cranes. The girl's large eyes reflected the beautiful figures of the two female disciples. "Master, when will I be able to ride the immortal crane and fly in the sky?" The old man, Qi Source, gently patted her head and said, "Wait until you have condensed the Five Qi in your heart, and can control magical objects and artifacts. Don't be too hasty. Cultivation requires patience.
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Please Rate this Translation - 3* This field is required.In the sky, a tall and a short figure stood side by side, the taller one being an old Daoist with a white beard, and the shorter one being a young girl with a spiritual aura. The old Daoist was carrying a small, jade-like object, and he spoke in a clear and melodious voice. "Listen well, my young apprentice. Our sect, the Deity Crossing Sect, has a long history and a profound reputation. Our founder, the XiXuan True Daoist, has spread the teachings of the One Vital Energy to the world, and has been recognized as a Celestial Immortal. This is the highest honor for a Daoist, and it is a testament to the power of our teachings. "Remember, our path is not just about cultivation, but also about compassion and wisdom. We must always be mindful of our actions and their impact on the world. The XiXuan True Daoist has taught us that the key to immortality lies within the Five Qi, which are the fundamental energies of the universe. By mastering these energies, we can transcend the mortal realm and achieve true enlightenment. "Now, let us proceed with your initiation. Take out the talisman that I have given you, and hold it in your hand. Focus your mind and your energy, and allow the power of the talisman to guide you. You will soon be able to feel the presence of the Five Qi, and you will be able to harness their power for your own cultivation." The young girl nodded eagerly, and she took out the talisman from her sleeve. She held it in her hand, closed her eyes, and began to focus her mind. The old Daoist watched her with a smile, and he could see the potential in her. He knew that she would become a great Daoist, just like her predecessors. As the girl meditated, a gentle breeze began to blow, and the air around her began to shimmer. The old Daoist could see the Five Qi beginning to manifest, and he knew that the girl was on the path to enlightenment. He reached out and gently touched her forehead, and he could
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Please Rate this Translation - 4* This field is required.Upon the cloud stood two figures, one tall and one short. The tall figure was an elderly Daoist with silvery hair, and he was accompanied by an adorable and lively girl, around eight or nine years of age. Leisurely clouds, serene mind, with a gentle breeze at your side, what is there to worry about? The elderly Daoist began to sing in a resonant voice: "When chaos split, the dragon and phoenix tribulations arose, ten thousand meetings passed in a snap. The ascension platform is unseen, only the song of the nine colored clouds in the heavy sky is heard. Helping others and oneself to cross the gloomy river, laughing at people and gods to dispel disasters. Why are you fond of this hometown, the wise predecessors fell only to rise. Remember this, our lineage is the Deity Crossing Sect, our founder is the famous XiXuan True Daoist from the West Kunlun in the current immortal gods list, the lineage he passed down is the "Dao of the Upright Qi", this is a profound method to attain longevity! Have you remembered all this? This will be your foundation in the future, you must never forget." "Mm! Disciple has remembered all of it!" The little girl nodded earnestly. The elderly Daoist shook his dust whisk and slowly rode the white cloud towards the large formation ahead. In his hand, he held a palm-sized jade talisman. The jade talisman flickered with a bright green light, and the mountain protection formation slowly cracked open, allowing the old Daoist and the girl to enter on their cloud. As soon as this master and disciple entered the formation, several white cranes swooped down from the clouds. On them stood a few young people dressed in Daoist robes and colorful skirts, who were the disciples currently in charge of patrolling the mountain. They greeted the old Daoist and saluted him, calling him 'Uncle Master Qi Yuan'. After asking if the girl was the new disciple of the old Daoist, they elegantly departed on their white cranes. The girl's big eyes were bright and sparkling, reflecting the departing figures of the two graceful female disciples. "Master, when can Ling'Er ride a crane in the sky?" "When you have refined the Five Qi within your chest, you will naturally be able to command objects," The old Daoist Qi Yuan stroked his beard and replied with a smile. "The cranes you saw are actually magical instruments, don’t rush; cultivation
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Please Rate this Translation - 5* This field is required.Two figures stood on a cloud, one tall and one short. The tall one was an old Taoist with white hair, and he was accompanied by an eight- or nine-year-old girl who looked delicate and bright. The white clouds were carefree, the breeze on the left brought no worries. Then the old Taoist sighed and sang: "The dragon and phoenix calamity was opened up by the primordial chaos, and the ten thousand years and ten thousand meetings passed in the blink of an eye. You don't see the celestial platform and the pavilion, only the nine songs of Huayue in the upper sky. Crossing people, crossing oneself, crossing the mysterious river, laughing at others, laughing at gods, eliminating disasters and disasters. Ask you why you cherish your hometown, and the ancients broke their bones to obtain good luck. You must remember that our sect is called [Deity Crossing Sect], and our founding ancestor is the famous XiXuan True Daoist on the current神仙榜 of the Western Kunlun. The teachings we inherit are the [One Qi True Heaven Dao], which is a very profound method of immortality! But do you all remember? This is your future foundation, and you must not forget it!" "Yes! The disciple remembers!" The girl nodded seriously, and the old Taoist shook his whisk and slowly approached the great formation in the clouds, holding a palm-sized jade talisman in his hand. The jade talisman glowed with a green light, and the protective mountain formation slowly opened a gap, allowing the old Taoist to lead the girl into the formation with a cloud. As soon as the two disciples entered the formation, several white cranes flew from the clouds and landed on them, standing on several young men wearing Taoist robes and colorful skirts. They were the disciples in charge of patrolling the mountain at this time. They greeted the old Taoist respectfully and called him 'Master Qiyuan', and after asking about the girl being the new disciple of the old Taoist, they gracefully left on the white cranes. The girl's big eyes were sparkling, reflecting the silhouette of the two graceful female disciples behind her. "Master, when will Ling'er be able to ride on the white crane and fly in the sky?" The old Taoist Qiyuan stroked his beard and smiled, "When you have cultivated the five qi in your chest, you can command objects to move. Those white cranes are actually all magical instruments transformed, so don't be in a hurry
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Please Rate this Translation - 6* This field is required.Two shadows were standing on the cloud—one was tall, and the other was shorter. The taller person was an old Daoist priest. Beside him was a sweet girl, who seemed to be around eight or nine years old. “The clouds were never-ending, and so were our thoughts. Yet, why is there a need to worry when the gentle breeze blew at our sides?” The old Daoist priest sang emotionally. “When the Primordial World was created, the Great Dragon-Phoenix War soon erupted. Time flew by in a snap of the fingers. “The pavilion leading to the Platform of the Immortals could not be seen. Only the magnificent songs from above the heavens could be heard. “Overcoming one’s obstacles, helping others with their obstacles, and crossing the river of troubles. Laughing at humans, laughing at the gods, and preventing disasters. “Why does one miss his homeland? Their ancestors have risked their lives and achieved serenity. “You must remember that the name of our sect is the Immortal Du Sect. Our ancestor who created the sect is the famous Perfected Du’e from West Kunlun. The Dao that we inherited is the Single Qi Heaven Regularization Dao. This is a complex but exceptional cultivation technique to achieve immortality! “Do you remember what I have said? This will lead you in your cultivation in the future. You must not forget it.” “Yes! I have remembered it all!” The little girl nodded her head earnestly. The old Daoist priest flicked his horsetail whisk and directed the white cloud to gradually approach the array formation in front. He took out a palm-size jade token and held it in his hand. As the jade token emitted beautiful green lights, a crack slowly appeared on the array formation that protected the mountains. The old Daoist priest and the little girl entered the array formation on the white cloud. Just as the master and disciple entered the array formation, a few white cranes glided in between the clouds and approached them. A few youngsters, who were clad in Daoist robes or colorful dresses, were standing on the cranes. They were the inner sect disciples who were currently responsible for patrolling the mountains. They came forward and greeted the old Daoist priest by the title Martial Uncle Qi Yuan. After finding out that this little girl was the old Daoist priest’s new disciple, they left swiftly on the white cranes. The little girl’s large eyes sparkled and reflected the two graceful female disciples’ silhouettes as they left. “Master, when can Ling’e move freely in the air on the immortal cranes?” “You will be able to do that on any objects once you manage to cultivate the Five Qi in your chest.” The old Daoist priest combed through his beard and smiled. “You may think that what you saw were immortal cranes, but they were actually all formed from some Dharma artifacts. Do not be impatient. Cultivation takes time.
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Please Rate this Translation - 7* This field is required.There were two figures standing on the clouds, one tall and one short, the tall one was a gray-haired old man, and he was carrying a beautiful girl who looked like eight or nine years old. The white clouds are long, the heart is long, and the breeze is accompanied by the left, why worry? I listened to the old Taoist and sang: "Hongmeng opened up the dragon and phoenix tribulation, and ten thousand thousand yuan will be snapped. I didn't see Sendai ascending to the pavilion, but I only heard the song of Chongxiao Jiuhua. Crossing people to cross their own rivers, laughing people laughing at gods to eliminate disasters. Ask the king why he is in his hometown, and the sages have to break their bones and fall down You have to remember that our Dao inheritance is called [Du Xianmen], and the founding patriarch is the famous West Kunlun Du'er Zhenren on the list of immortals today, and the preaching is inherited as [One Qi Zheng Heavenly Dao], which is a very profound immortal method! Can you remember them all? This is your future heel, don't forget it. ""Hmmm! Memorized them all! "The girl nodded very seriously, Lao Dao shook off the dust, and slowly approached the large array in front of him with the white clouds, and also took out a palm-sized jade talisman in his hand. Seeing the jade talisman flashing with green light, a crack slowly cracked out of the mountain protection array, and Rong Laodao took the girl into the clouds. As soon as the pair of masters and apprentices entered the formation, several white cranes swept from the clouds, and on them stood several young men in Taoist robes and colorful skirts, who were the disciples in charge of patrolling the mountain at this time. They greeted the old Taoist salute forward, called 'Uncle Qi Yuan', and after asking this girl if this old Taoist was the new apprentice, they stepped on the white crane and left in style. The girl's big eyes were shining, reflecting the backs of the two graceful female disciples. "Master, when will Ling'e be able to step on the crane in the sky?" "When you refine the five qi in your chest, you can move on your own," the old Taoist Qi Yuan stroked his beard and smiled, "You see that it is an immortal crane, in fact, it is all transformed by some magic weapons, don't worry, practice slowly."
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Please Rate this Translation - 8* This field is required.As two figures stood above the clouds, one tall and one short, the old Daoist with white hair led a young girl with a gifted aura. As white clouds slowly drifted by, the old Daoist began to sing: "When the world was created, and the dragon and phoenix roamed, thousands of years passed in the blink of an eye. No longer can we see the divine palace, only the nine songs of the sky. Crossing the river of darkness, both for oneself and others, we laugh at the misfortune of both gods and mortals. Why do you cling to your past, when the sages have sacrificed to gain enlightenment? Remember, our sect is known as Deity Crossing Sect, and our founding master is the famous XiXuan True Daoist on the current divine list of the Western Kunlun. Our sect follows the path of One Qi Righteous Way, which is a profound method for longevity! Did you remember all that? It will be your guiding principle, so do not forget. "Yes, Master!" The girl nodded solemnly, and the old Daoist waved his whisk as they approached the array on the white cloud. He held a jade talisman the size of his palm, which glowed green and opened a gap in the protective array. The master and disciple entered. As soon as they entered, several white cranes appeared from the clouds, carrying young men and women in colorful robes. These were the disciples on duty who were patrolling the mountain. They greeted the old Daoist and called him "Master Qiyuan." After learning that the girl was the old Daoist's new disciple, they bid farewell and left on their cranes. The girl's eyes sparkled as she watched the graceful figures disappear. "Master, when can Ling'er ride on a crane too?" "When you cultivate the Five Qi in your chest, you can command objects and fly with them. The cranes you see are actually magical artifacts. Don't rush, take your time in your practice," the old Daoist, Master Qiyuan, stroked his beard and smiled.
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Please Rate this Translation - 9* This field is required.On a cloud, a tall and a short figure stood side by side. The tall figure was a white-haired old Daoist, who was carrying a young girl who looked to be eight or nine years old. The old Daoist sang a song: The universe was born in chaos, The cycle of reincarnation came and went. I never reached the immortal peak, But still I heard the songs of the nine heavens. I have helped others and myself, I have laughed at gods and demons, And I have dispelled all disasters. Why do you still miss your hometown? The ancients broke their bones to find their destiny. The old Daoist turned to the young girl and said, "Remember, our sect is called the Deity Crossing Sect. Our founder, XiXuan True Daoist, is a famous immortal on the Heavenly Rankings. Our sect's teachings are the One Qi True Heaven Dao, which is a profound method of longevity. Do you remember all of that?" The young girl nodded solemnly. The old Daoist waved his whisk and flew the cloud towards a large formation ahead. He also took out a jade talisman about the size of a palm. The jade talisman flashed with green light, and the mountain protection formation slowly opened a crack, allowing the old Daoist and the young girl to fly inside. As soon as the master and disciple entered the formation, a few white cranes flew down from the clouds. On the cranes were several young people dressed in Daoist robes and colorful skirts. They were the sect's disciples who were responsible for patrolling the mountain. They greeted the old Daoist and called him "Senior Brother Qi Yuan." They asked if the young girl was his new disciple, and then they flew away on their white cranes. The young girl's eyes sparkled as she watched the two graceful female disciples leave. "Master, when will Ling'Er be able to ride a crane and fly?" she asked. "Once you have cultivated the Five Qi in your chest, you will be able to control objects," said Senior Brother Qi Yuan with a smile. "Those cranes are actually magical artifacts. Don't be in a hurry. Cultivation takes time." The young girl nodded again. She was determined to one day become an immortal and ride a crane through the clouds.
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