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云上站着一高一矮两道身影，高的是一位头发花白的老道，他带着一名八九岁模样的灵秀女童。
白云悠悠心悠悠，清风伴左何须愁？
便听老道慨声而歌：
“鸿蒙开辟龙凤劫，万元千会弹指过。
不见仙台登临阁，只闻重霄九华歌。
渡人渡己度幽河，笑人笑神消灾祸。
问君何以眷故里，先贤折骨得运落

你要记住，咱们道承名为【度仙门】，开山祖师乃当今仙神榜上赫赫有名的西昆仑度厄真人，所传道承为【一气正天道】，这是极高深的长生妙法！
可都记住了？这可是你今后的跟脚，不可忘却哦。”
“嗯！徒儿都记住了！”
女童十分认真地点点头，老道甩了甩拂尘，驾着白云朝着前方大阵缓缓靠近，手中也拿出了一只巴掌大小的玉符。
就见玉符闪烁出盈盈绿光，护山大阵便缓缓裂出了一条缝隙，容老道带着女童驾云入内。
这对师徒刚进阵，几只白鹤就从云间低掠而来，其上站着几名身着道袍彩裙的年轻人，正是此时负责巡山的门内弟子。
他们向前与老道见礼打了个招呼，口称‘齐源师叔’，问过这女童是这老道新收的徒弟之后，便踩着白鹤潇洒离开。
女童那双大眼亮晶晶的，倒映着那两位身姿婀娜的女弟子背影。
“师父，灵娥什么时候能踩着仙鹤御空呀。”
“待你炼出了胸中五气，自可御物而行，”老道齐源抚须笑道，“你见那是仙鹤，其实都是一些法器所化，不要着急，修行要慢慢来才是。
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Please Rate this Translation -- 1* This field is required.Above the clouds stood two figures—one tall, one short. The taller was an elderly Daoist with hair as white as snow, and beside him was a young girl of around eight or nine years old, her delicate features radiant with an air of innocence and wisdom. The drifting clouds, the gentle breeze—what cause was there for sorrow when nature accompanied them so serenely? The old Daoist broke into song, his voice resonating with the weight of ages: At the dawn of chaos, the Dragon and Phoenix collide, In but a blink, ten thousand cycles pass.  No longer do we see the Immortal Stands above, We only hear the songs of Ninefold Heavens afar.  To cross others, to cross oneself, to traverse the Nether River, Laughing at mortals and gods alike, disasters dissolve to naught.  Why, you ask, should I still long for home? The ancients, their bones shattered, found their fate tied to the winds." After finishing his song, the old Daoist turned to the young girl and said, "Remember well, our sect is called the Deity Crossing Sect. Our founding master, none other than the renowned XiXuan True Daoist of West Kunlun, is listed amongst the greatest immortals. He passed down to us the profound method known as the One Qi True Heaven Dao, a peerless path to longevity and enlightenment. This will be your foundation for the future, so never forget it." The young girl, Ling'Er, nodded earnestly, her face full of determination. "Yes, Master! Your disciple will remember it all!" With a wave of his horsetail whisk, the old Daoist guided their cloud forward, slowly approaching a grand formation that shimmered in the distance. In his hand, he held a jade talisman, no larger than his palm. As the talisman glowed with a soft green light, the protective formation surrounding the mountain gradually parted, opening a narrow passage for them to enter. The old Daoist, with Ling'Er by his side, rode the cloud through the breach. No sooner had they entered the formation than several white cranes swooped down from the sky, their graceful forms carrying several young disciples dressed in vibrant Daoist robes. These were the sect’s disciples, currently responsible for patrolling the mountain. Bowing respectfully, they greeted the old Daoist as "Uncle-Master Qiyuan." After learning that the young girl was his newly accepted disciple, they exchanged a few pleasantries before gracefully soaring away on their cranes. Ling'Er’s eyes sparkled as she watched the departing figures, their flowing robes and poised demeanor reflected in her wide, curious gaze. "Master, when will I be able to ride a crane through the skies like them?" she asked eagerly. Her master, Daoist Qiyuan, stroked his beard with a chuckle. "Once you have cultivated the Five Qi within your body, you will naturally be able to Command Objects and soar through the air. What you saw were not real cranes, but Magical Instruments taking their form. Don’t rush—cultivation is a gradual process. You must take it step by step." Ling'Er nodded, her heart filled with anticipation for the journey ahead.
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Please Rate this Translation - 2* This field is required.On the clouds stood two figures, one tall and one short. The tall one was an old Daoist with grizzled hair, and he was accompanied by a delicate-looking young girl of eight or nine years old. The white clouds drifted leisurely, and the clear breeze accompanied them on the left. What was there to worry about? The old Daoist sang with emotion: "In the era of Pangu's creation, the dragon and phoenix calamity opened up, and thousands of gatherings passed in a snap of the fingers. The immortal terrace and the ascending pavilion were nowhere to be seen, and only the song of the Nine Glories in the heavens could be heard. Crossing people, crossing oneself, and crossing the dark river, laughing at people and gods to dispel disasters and calamities. Asking why you are attached to your hometown, the sages of the past broke their bones to obtain the opportunity." "You must remember, our Dao sect is called the 【Deity Crossing Sect】, and the founding patriarch is the renowned XiXuan True Daoist on the current Divine Immortal Rankings. The Dao lineage he passed down is the 【One Qi Rectifying the Heavenly Dao】, which is an extremely profound and wonderful method of longevity!  Have you remembered it all? This will be your foothold in the future, so don't forget it." "Yes! This disciple has remembered it all!"  The young girl nodded very seriously. The old Daoist swung his duster and slowly approached the large formation ahead on the white clouds, taking out a jade talisman the size of a palm. The jade talisman flashed with a shimmering green light, and the mountain-protecting formation slowly cracked open, allowing the old Daoist and the young girl to enter on the clouds. As soon as the master and disciple entered the formation, several white cranes swooped down from the clouds, with young people dressed in Daoist robes and colorful skirts standing on them. They were the inner sect disciples responsible for patrolling the mountain at this time. They came forward to greet the old Daoist, addressing him as 'Master Uncle Qi Yuan'. After asking if the young girl was the old Daoist's newly accepted disciple, they departed elegantly on the white cranes. The young girl's big eyes sparkled, reflecting the graceful figures of the two female disciples. "Master, when can Ling'Er ride on an immortal crane and soar through the sky?" "When you have refined the Five Qi in your chest, you will be able to command objects and travel," Old Daoist Qi Yuan stroked his beard and smiled. "You see that they are immortal cranes, but in fact, they are all transformed from Magical Instruments. Don't be in a hurry. Cultivation should be taken slowly."
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Please Rate this Translation - 3* This field is required.Atop the clouds stood two figures, one tall and one small. The taller one was an elderly Daoist with hair as white as snow, accompanied by a bright-eyed girl of about eight or nine. White clouds drifted leisurely, a gentle breeze caressed their faces, dispelling all worries. The old Daoist sang in a resonant voice: "From primordial chaos, dragons and phoenixes clashed, Ten thousand years passed in a blink of an eye. The Terrace of Immortals remains unseen, Only the songs of Nine Glories echo from the highest heavens. Ferrying others, ferrying oneself, ferrying across the River of Souls, Laughing at men, laughing at gods, warding off disasters and woes. Ask you, why linger in your homeland? Our ancestors broke their bones to seize destiny's fall." "Remember this," he said, his voice regaining its normal tone. "Our sect is called the Deity Crossing Sect. Our founding ancestor is the renowned XiXuan True Daoist, whose name shines brightly on the current Immortal and God Roll. The Dao he passed down is the One Qi Righteous Dao, a profound method for achieving longevity!" "Have you memorized it all? This is your foundation, never forget it." "Yes! I've memorized everything, Master!" the little girl, Ling'Er, nodded earnestly. The old Daoist flicked his horsetail whisk and steered the cloud towards the grand formation ahead, taking out a palm-sized jade talisman. The talisman shimmered with a verdant glow, and the protective formation slowly parted, creating a gap for the old Daoist and the girl to enter. As soon as the master and disciple entered the formation, several white cranes descended from the clouds. Atop them stood young men and women dressed in Daoist robes and colorful skirts, disciples of the sect currently on patrol duty. They greeted the old Daoist with a bow, addressing him as "Uncle QiYuan," and inquired about the girl, learning she was his newly accepted disciple. Then, with a flourish, they rode their cranes away. Ling'Er's large eyes sparkled, reflecting the graceful figures of the two female disciples. "Master, when will Ling'Er be able to ride a celestial crane and fly?" "When you cultivate the Five Qi within your chest, you will naturally be able to command objects," the old Daoist QiYuan replied with a smile, stroking his beard. "What you see as celestial cranes are actually magical instruments transformed. Don't be impatient, cultivation requires gradual progress."
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Please Rate this Translation - 4* This field is required.Two figures stood on the clouds, one tall and one short. The tall one was an elderly Daoist with hair as white as flowers, accompanied by a lovely young girl around eight or nine years old, with a spirit-like aura. The white clouds drifted lazily, and the gentle breeze whispered secrets to the ear. Suddenly, the elderly Daoist's voice boomed as he sang: "The primordial chaos unfolded, and the dragon and phoenix calamity passed. A thousand years went by like a snap of the fingers. I do not see the Immortal Platform ascending to the heavenly altar, but only hear the Nine-Heavens song echoing. I ferry people across the river of darkness, laughing and dispelling disasters. Ask yourself, why do you cherish your hometown? The wise ones broke their bones to obtain the fortune that fell from above." "Remember, our sect is called Deity Crossing Sect, and our founding master is the renowned XiXuan True Daoist, who is listed on the current Immortal Rankings. The daoist tradition we inherited is the One Qi Righteous Heaven Dao, which is an extremely profound and long-standing mystical art!" "Do you remember? This will be your foundation for the future, and you must not forget!" The young girl nodded solemnly, and the elderly Daoist swept his sleeves, guiding the white clouds towards the grand formation ahead. He also produced a palm-sized jade talisman from his hand. As the jade talisman flashed with a soft, green light, the mountain-guarding formation slowly cracked open, allowing the elderly Daoist and the young girl to ride the clouds into the interior. As soon as they entered the formation, several white cranes descended from the clouds, carrying several young disciples in Daoist robes and colorful skirts. They were the inner sect disciples responsible for patrolling the mountain at this time. They greeted the elderly Daoist with a bow and a smile, calling him "Uncle Qi Yuan." After inquiring about the young girl being his new disciple, they mounted their cranes and departed with a carefree attitude. The young girl's bright, shining eyes reflected the elegant silhouettes of the two female disciples. "Master, when can Ling'Er ride on a crane and command the clouds?" "When you cultivate the Five Qi in your chest, you will be able to command objects and move freely," the elderly Daoist, Qi Yuan, chuckled as he stroked his beard. "You see those cranes? They are actually transformed magical instruments. Don't be impatient; cultivation requires slow and steady progress."
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Please Rate this Translation - 5* This field is required.Two figures stood upon the clouds: one tall and one short. The taller was a white-haired old Daoist, who led a delicate young girl of eight or nine. The old Daoist sang with a melancholy voice: "Dragon and Phoenix Tribulations mark the dawn of primordial chaos, Ten thousand years pass like the snap of a finger. No immortal platform to ascend, only heavenly music from the highest heavens. Crossing the river of the underworld, both self and others shall be saved. Smiling at all living beings, gods and humans alike, calamity is dispelled. Why do you dwell so long within your homeland? Ancestor's sacrifice yields fortune's fall." Remember this: Our sect name is Crossing Immortal Gate, and our founder is none other than the illustrious Daoist Master Crossing Disaster of the Western Kunlun Mountain, whose teachings we carry forth: One Qi Righteousness, a profound method for attaining immortality! Have you all memorized it? These are the foundations upon which you will build your futures; do not forget them." "Yes! This disciple has memorized it!" The young girl nodded earnestly. The old Daoist flicked his whisk once more, then guided the cloud slowly toward the great array up ahead, simultaneously producing a palm-sized jade talisman from within his robe. The jade talisman glowed with a bright green light as the mountain's protective array slowly parted to allow the old Daoist and young girl to enter on their cloud. As soon as this master-disciple pair stepped through, several white cranes swooped down from the clouds, perching atop them were young men dressed in Daoist robes and colorful skirts—these were the disciples responsible for patrolling the mountain at present. They bowed respectfully to the old Daoist, addressing him as 'Qi Yuan-shishu', then asked if the girl was the old Daoist's newly accepted disciple after confirming her identity. With that, they gracefully departed, stepping onto the cranes' backs. The girl's eyes sparkled brightly, reflecting the graceful silhouettes of those two female disciples. "Master, when will Ling'e be able to ride the crane and fly?" "When you cultivate your five qi, you shall," Qi Yuan smiled, stroking his beard. "What you see as a crane is merely a magical artifact transformed by cultivation. Do not worry; progress in cultivation must be gradual."
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Please Rate this Translation - 6* This field is required.Two shadows were standing on the cloud—one was tall, and the other was shorter. The taller person was an old Daoist priest. Beside him was a sweet girl, who seemed to be around eight or nine years old. “The clouds were never-ending, and so were our thoughts. Yet, why is there a need to worry when the gentle breeze blew at our sides?” The old Daoist priest sang emotionally. “When the Primordial World was created, the Great Dragon-Phoenix War soon erupted. Time flew by in a snap of the fingers. “The pavilion leading to the Platform of the Immortals could not be seen. Only the magnificent songs from above the heavens could be heard. “Overcoming one’s obstacles, helping others with their obstacles, and crossing the river of troubles. Laughing at humans, laughing at the gods, and preventing disasters. “Why does one miss his homeland? Their ancestors have risked their lives and achieved serenity. “You must remember that the name of our sect is the Immortal Du Sect. Our ancestor who created the sect is the famous Perfected Du’e from West Kunlun. The Dao that we inherited is the Single Qi Heaven Regularization Dao. This is a complex but exceptional cultivation technique to achieve immortality! “Do you remember what I have said? This will lead you in your cultivation in the future. You must not forget it.” “Yes! I have remembered it all!” The little girl nodded her head earnestly. The old Daoist priest flicked his horsetail whisk and directed the white cloud to gradually approach the array formation in front. He took out a palm-size jade token and held it in his hand. As the jade token emitted beautiful green lights, a crack slowly appeared on the array formation that protected the mountains. The old Daoist priest and the little girl entered the array formation on the white cloud. Just as the master and disciple entered the array formation, a few white cranes glided in between the clouds and approached them. A few youngsters, who were clad in Daoist robes or colorful dresses, were standing on the cranes. They were the inner sect disciples who were currently responsible for patrolling the mountains. They came forward and greeted the old Daoist priest by the title Martial Uncle Qi Yuan. After finding out that this little girl was the old Daoist priest’s new disciple, they left swiftly on the white cranes. The little girl’s large eyes sparkled and reflected the two graceful female disciples’ silhouettes as they left. “Master, when can Ling’e move freely in the air on the immortal cranes?” “You will be able to do that on any objects once you manage to cultivate the Five Qi in your chest.” The old Daoist priest combed through his beard and smiled. “You may think that what you saw were immortal cranes, but they were actually all formed from some Dharma artifacts. Do not be impatient. Cultivation takes time.
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Please Rate this Translation - 7* This field is required.Upon a cloud stood two figures, one tall and one short. The tall figure was an old Daoist with white hair, accompanied by a yStanding on the clouds were two figures, one tall and one short. The taller was an elderly Daoist with hair as white as flowers, accompanied by a spirited young girl around eight or nine years old. The white clouds drifted lazily, and the gentle breeze whispered secrets to the ear. Suddenly, the elderly Daoist's voice boomed as he sang: "In the primordial chaos, the dragon and phoenix calamity unfolded, and a thousand years passed like a snap of the fingers. I do not see the Immortal Platform ascending to the heavenly altar, but only hear the Nine-Heavens song echoing. I ferry people across the river of darkness, laughing and dispelling disasters. Ask yourself, why do you cherish your hometown? The wise ones broke their bones to obtain the fortune that fell from above." "You must remember, our sect is named the Deity Crossing Sect. Our founding master is the renowned XiXuan True Daoist, who is listed on the current Immortal Rankings. The daoist tradition we inherited is the One Qi Righteous Heaven Dao, which is an extremely profound and long-standing mystical art!" "Have you remembered all of this? This will be your foundation for the future, and you must not forget it." "Yes! Disciple has remembered everything!" the young girl nodded earnestly. The elderly Daoist, Qi Yuan, flicked his sleeve, guiding the white clouds toward the grand formation ahead. He also produced a palm-sized jade talisman from his hand. As the jade talisman flashed with a soft, green light, the mountain-guarding formation slowly cracked open, allowing the elderly Daoist and the young girl to ride the clouds into the interior. As soon as they entered the formation, several white cranes descended from the clouds, carrying several young disciples in Daoist robes and colorful skirts. They were the inner sect disciples responsible for patrolling the mountain at this time. They greeted the elderly Daoist with a bow and a smile, calling him "Uncle Qi Yuan." After inquiring about the young girl being his new disciple, they mounted their cranes and departed with a carefree attitude. The young girl's bright, shining eyes reflected the graceful silhouettes of the two female disciples. "Master, when can Ling'Er ride on a crane and command the clouds?" "When you cultivate the Five Qi in your chest, you will be able to command objects and move freely," the elderly Daoist, Qi Yuan, chuckled as he stroked his beard. "You see those cranes? They are actually transformed magical instruments. Don't be impatient; cultivation requires slow and steady progress."
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Please Rate this Translation - 8* This field is required.There were two figures standing on the clouds, one tall and one short, the tall one was a gray-haired old man, and he was carrying a beautiful girl who looked like eight or nine years old. The white clouds are long, the heart is long, and the breeze is accompanied by the left, why worry? I listened to the old Taoist and sang: "Hongmeng opened up the dragon and phoenix tribulation, and ten thousand thousand yuan will be snapped. I didn't see Sendai ascending to the pavilion, but I only heard the song of Chongxiao Jiuhua. Crossing people to cross their own rivers, laughing people laughing at gods to eliminate disasters. Ask the king why he is in his hometown, and the sages have to break their bones and fall down You have to remember that our Dao inheritance is called [Du Xianmen], and the founding patriarch is the famous West Kunlun Du'er Zhenren on the list of immortals today, and the preaching is inherited as [One Qi Zheng Heavenly Dao], which is a very profound immortal method! Can you remember them all? This is your future heel, don't forget it. ""Hmmm! Memorized them all! "The girl nodded very seriously, Lao Dao shook off the dust, and slowly approached the large array in front of the white clouds, and also took out a palm-sized jade talisman in her hand. Seeing that the jade talisman flashed with green light, the mountain protection array slowly cracked a gap, and Rong Laodao took the girl into the clouds. As soon as the pair of masters and apprentices entered the formation, several white cranes swept from the clouds, and on them stood several young men in Taoist robes and colorful skirts, who were the disciples in charge of patrolling the mountain at this time. They greeted the old Taoist salute forward, called 'Uncle Qi Yuan', and after asking this girl if this old Taoist was the new apprentice, they stepped on the white crane and left in style. The girl's big eyes were shining, reflecting the backs of the two graceful female disciples. "Master, when will Ling'e be able to step on the crane in the sky?" "When you refine the five qi in your chest, you can move on your own," the old Taoist Qi Yuan stroked his beard and smiled, "You see that it is an immortal crane, in fact, it is all transformed by some magic weapons, don't worry, practice slowly."
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Please Rate this Translation - 9* This field is required.Upon a cloud stood two figures, one tall and one short. The tall figure was an old Daoist with white hair, accompanied by a young girl of about eight or nine, her appearance as spirited and graceful as a celestial being. The clouds drifted leisurely, as did their hearts, with the gentle breeze to their left, leaving no room for worry. Then, the old Daoist began to sing with a sense of grandeur: "Since the cosmos' birth, the dragon and phoenix calamity, Through countless eons, time has swiftly flown. No sight of the immortal terrace, nor the ascending hall, Only the song of Jiugua echoes in the highest heavens. Crossing the river of shadows, with laughter at gods and men, Dispelling calamities, what remains is joy. Why do you cling to your old home, When the wisdom of the ancients has fallen like petals?" "Remember well, our Daoist lineage is called the Deity Crossing Sect, Our founding ancestor is the renowned XiXuan True Daoist from the West Kunlun, The path he has passed down is the 'One Qi Orthodox Heavenly Dao,' A profound method for eternal life and wonder! Have you committed this to memory? It is your future foundation, not to be forgotten." "Yes, Master! Your disciple remembers it all!" The girl nodded earnestly. The old Daoist, Qi Yuan, flicked his horsetail whisk and guided the cloud towards the grand formation ahead, producing a small jade talisman from his hand. The talisman flickered with a soft green light, and the mountain protection formation slowly opened a gap, allowing the Daoist and his disciple to enter on their cloud. No sooner had the master and disciple entered the formation than several white cranes swept low from the clouds, upon which stood several young people in Daoist robes and colorful skirts—the disciples currently on duty to patrol the mountain. They approached the old Daoist to pay their respects, addressing him as 'Uncle Qi Yuan,' and after inquiring about the girl being his new disciple, they departed gracefully on their cranes. The girl's large, sparkling eyes reflected the graceful figures of the two female disciples as they left. "Master, when will Ling'Er be able to ride a crane through the sky?" "Once you have cultivated the Five Qi within your chest, you will be able to command objects," Daoist Qi Yuan stroked his beard and smiled. "What you see as cranes are actually magical instruments. Do not be impatient; cultivation must progress gradually."
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