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Your Relation to the author*

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Your Age Market*

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Your Regional Mindset*

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Your Preferred Novel Genre(s): (check all that apply)*

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How long did it take you to read?

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How often do you read fiction books?*

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What component(s) do you like most about Sin Senses Consensus?*

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How would you rate the pacing of the book? (rate of 5 is balanced)*

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Was there any part of the book that you felt dragged or felt too slow? If so, please specify the section(s).
Rate how well did the character development in the book resonate with you? (rate of 5 is somewhat)*

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Did you find the shifts between Kaly’s intellectual journey and her sexual journey and emotional journey engaging and easy to follow? If not, what could improve this?*
Were the themes of BondageDominanceSubmissionMasochism, sexual power dynamics, and sexual scenes handled in a way that felt respectful and yet intriguing?*

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Were the themes of the Catholic religion, spiritual development, and religious rituals handled in a way that felt respectful and yet intriguing?*

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Is there a scene or character interaction that felt particularly memorable or impactful? Please explain why.
Plot and Character Analysis:
Kaly’s relationships with both the Professor & the Priest/Dom are complex. Did these relationships feel authentic & well-developed? Why or why not?*
Which character or plot element could use more development or clarification? *
Did the ending leave you feeling satisfied with Kaly’s journey in the first book? What would you like to see explored in the sequel?*
Kaly experiences growth as both an individual exploring her boundaries & an emotional healer for others. Do you feel that her journey of self-discovery was believable & inspiring?*
Overall Reader Experience:
Honestly how many stars would you rate Sin Senses Consensus?*

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Honestly would you recommend Sin Senses Consensus to your peers?*

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How would you describe Sin Senses Consensus in a few sentences to someone interested in reading it?*
On a scale of 1-10, how would you rate the book's ability to transport you into its world?*

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Which genre(s) best define Sin Senses Consensus?*

Dark RomancePsychological FictionErotic FictionComing of AgeUpmarket FictionPoetic NarrativeMagical SurrealismLiterary FictionBased on Real-Life / Autobiographical Elements
If given the opportunity, would you like to see Sin Senses Consensus adapted into another media?*

Yes, a graphic novelYes, a TV seriesYes, a movieYes, a stage playNo, keep as a book
How did you feel about the book’s exploration of themes like power dynamics, surrender, and self-discovery?*

I found them thought-provoking and immersiveThey were interesting but uncomfortable at timesThey felt too intenseOther
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Did you find the blend of romance, erotica, and psychological elements to be balanced, or would you prefer more of one aspect?*

More romanceMore eroticaMore psychological elementsIt felt balanced as it is
How would you describe the overall tone of the book?*

IntenseSensual FlowEmpoweringDarkly romanticPsychological/ ReflectiveOther
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What was the most surprising or unexpected element of Sin Senses Consensus?*
Did the book evoke any particular emotions or memories for you? Please describe if comfortable.
If you could ask the author one question about the book or Kaly’s character, what would it be?
Did the book inspire you to reflect on any particular aspects of your own life or beliefs? If so, please share.
What types of themes or character developments are you most excited to see in the upcoming sequels?*
Is there anything else you’d like to share about your experience reading Sin Senses Consensus?
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