Story feedback
What story / chapter(s) are you giving feedback on?
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Merge Conflict chapters 1-3 / chapter 1 / etc.
What did you like about the story?
character development / the part where Alan ... / pacing / the end of chapter ... / the dialog
What didn't you like about the story?
no character development in chapter ... / the scene where Alan ... / the dialog / etc.
Were there any technical aspects of the story that seemed/were unrealistic?
Would you read again?
Yes
No
Maybe if it was improved...
Thanks for providing feedback. It truly helps me improve my story!
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