• Essay Review

    I'll review your Personal Statement or supplementals, as many essays as you choose, and send each one back with line by line edits. I've helped 100+ students get into every Ivy League school, and this is the same feedback I give my own students.
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  • What you'll receive

    Your edited essays, delivered by email within 7 business days of your submission. Need it sooner? Rush delivery covers all your essays for one flat fee per order: 72 hour delivery for $99, or 24 hour delivery for $199 (select one at checkout below).

    • A review of each essay you order, Personal Statement or Supplemental
    • Line by line feedback on clarity, flow and impact
    • Suggestions to strengthen your fit with the school's values, for supplementals like Why Penn or Why Columbia
    • Flags on clichés and generic lines that make you sound like everyone else
    • Edits that bring out your voice, leadership and narrative
  • What's not included

    This is a one time review of the essays you submit. It doesn't include writing or rewriting your essays for you, essays beyond the number you order, a review of later drafts, live meetings or ongoing advising. If you want those, I offer a Common App Review, Live Meetings and coaching packages separately.

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  • Terms

    By submitting, you agree to the following. All sales are final. Once your essays are submitted and payment is processed, work begins and no refunds are issued, in whole or in part, for any reason. My feedback is advisory. Admission decisions are made solely by each college, and no specific outcome is guaranteed. You are responsible for the final content of your essays and for confirming they are your own original work.

    Your materials and my feedback are kept strictly confidential. I never share, sell or publish them, and I may refer to general lessons only in fully anonymized form that can't identify you.

    Standard delivery is within 7 business days of a complete submission. Rush delivery is within 72 hours ($99) or 24 hours ($199), depending on the option you select, and the rush clock starts once the rush fee is paid. The rush fee is non refundable on the same terms as the review. Please upload at least 7 business days before your deadline. Late submissions without rush are reviewed on the standard timeline.

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            Essay Review Service

            $199 for your first essay. Delivered within 7 business days. Need more? Add extra essays below at $99 each.

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            $99 per additional essay. Select this and choose how many extra essays you're submitting. Delivered within 7 business days.

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            Optional. Select this to get all of your edited essays within 72 hours instead of 7 business days. One flat fee per order. Choose one rush option only.

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