• Common App and Essay Review

    Choose the review you want below to see what's included. I've helped 100+ students get into every Ivy League school, and this is the same feedback I give my own students.
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  • Applying to the UCs too? Order your UC application and PIQ review through my UC Application and PIQ Review form.

  • What you'll receive with the Common App Review

    One written report, delivered by email within 7 business days of your submission. Need it sooner? Rush delivery is one flat fee: 72 hour delivery for $99, or 24 hour delivery for $199 (select one at checkout below).

    • Personal Statement critique: what works, what's flat, and how to make it memorable
    • Line by line edits to your Activities List
    • Honors section: ordering, wording and how to show the level of each award
    • Additional Information: what belongs there and what doesn't
    • A check for inconsistencies, gaps or anything that reads as a weakness
    • Recommendations for reframing your experiences for Ivy League and Top 20 schools like Penn, Stanford and Duke
    • Specific edits and rewritten examples throughout
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  • What's not included in the Common App Review

    This is a one time written review of the Common App you share. It doesn't include writing or rewriting your essays for you, supplemental essays (check Essay Review above to add them), a review of later drafts, live meetings, school list strategy or ongoing advising. If you want those, I offer a UC Application and PIQ Review, Live Meetings and Coaching Packages separately.

  • What you'll receive with the Essay Review

    Your edited essays, delivered by email within 7 business days of your submission. Need it sooner? Rush delivery covers all your essays for one flat fee per order: 72 hour delivery for $99, or 24 hour delivery for $199 (select one at checkout below).

    • A review of each essay you order, Personal Statement or Supplemental
    • Line by line feedback on clarity, flow and impact
    • Suggestions to strengthen your fit with the school's values, for supplementals like Why Penn or Why Columbia
    • Flags on clichés and generic lines that make you sound like everyone else
    • Edits that bring out your voice, leadership and narrative
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  • What's not included in the Essay Review

    This is a one time review of the essays you submit. It doesn't include writing or rewriting your essays for you, essays beyond the number you order, a review of later drafts, live meetings or ongoing advising. If you want those, I offer a UC Application and PIQ Review, Live Meetings and Coaching Packages separately.

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    By submitting, you agree to the following. All sales are final. Once your materials are submitted and payment is processed, work begins and no refunds are issued, in whole or in part, for any reason. My feedback is advisory. Admission decisions are made solely by each college, and no specific outcome is guaranteed. You are responsible for the final content of your application and essays and for confirming they are your own original work.

    Your materials and my feedback are kept strictly confidential. I never share, sell or publish them, and I may refer to general lessons only in fully anonymized form that can't identify you.

    Standard delivery is within 7 business days of a complete submission. Rush delivery is within 72 hours ($99) or 24 hours ($199), depending on the option you select, and the rush clock starts once the rush fee is paid. The rush fee is non refundable on the same terms as the review. Please upload at least 7 business days before your deadline. Late submissions without rush are reviewed on the standard timeline.

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            Common App Review

            One written review of your full Common App, delivered within 7 business days.

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            Essay Review Service

            $199 for your first essay. Delivered within 7 business days. Need more? Add extra essays below at $99 each.

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            Additional Essays

            $99 per additional essay. Select this and choose how many extra essays you're submitting. Delivered within 7 business days.

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            Optional. One flat fee per order, no matter how many reviews you choose. Choose 72 hours or 24 hours.

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