As you have no doubt experienced, coming up with a fresh story to tell—a story that is borne out by the details—is hard work! So let us record what we have accomplished.
Would you please attach your "before" and "after" drafts. The "before" draft could be the draft/document you submitted at the start of the course and the "after" could be the document you have now (e.g., a working document with the new Intro, Outline, and paragraphs in section).